Re: OT: Hell is For Heroes.
Did I just make "Captain" or is it just that I haven't been here much in the last year?
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Re: OT: Hell is For Heroes.
That was plesant. I look forward to the next entirely different AZ story.
its been so long i've forgotten earlier parts though, it would be cool if it was all together in one easy to read place - kinda like Dogscoff did when he put his all on a webpage. |
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Suggestion for the revisions: The 'original' Alice could remember more things, fragments of the 'long exposition' that Admiral Alice had to deliver at the end, without completely spoiling the story. When they discover that the Taurans are back, for example, she could 'know' that the aliens operating the warships are not the 'real' Taurans. The final explanation could still be held to the absolute end, but this 'hint' makes it seem less like a 'gotcha' or cop out. |
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I have compiled it into one text document and put in online in my Yahoo Briefcase for now. I left in some of the "forum flavor" bits, and I've corrected it for typos out to page 26, but haven't gone back to look for the annoying ones that spellcheck can't find ("to" for "too", etc.)
http://us.f13.yahoofs.com/bc/43ceff1...4gOeIBiAtQTnVg No particular reason, just a fan and trying to help out others while the final version gets compiled by AZ. TT |
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Yahoo Briefcase is closing so I moved the .pdf to Windows Live Skydrive. It's here: http://cid-fb2996a974fa800c.skydrive...ublic/HI4H.pdf Cheers, y'all, Turin |
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