An interesting OT thought: When I read stories that are this engaging, I usually start to visualize the characters in my head. For some reason, on this one, I'm getting really good environment images but I have no faces yet for the main characters...
AZ, have you done any "preliminary casting" in your head for when this gets made into a movie?
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