[Psitticine]

Originally posted by HJ:

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Originally posted by Phoenix-D:

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Originally posted by HJ:
A few more:

- in the description of Blood Boil spell, it should say "one of the few blood magic spells that don't require" instead of "one of the few blood magic spells that doesn't require"

Umm, you sure you don't have that backwards? From your quote, doesn't reads correctly..

"One of the few blood magic spells that do not require"

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"One of the fhew blood magic spells that does not require"

Second is correct.

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"Spells that do not require" is a complete phrase, I believe, and that's why I think it shouldn't be "doesn't". The "do not require" part describes the group that this particular spell is part of, not the spell itself.

I guess that we should ask someone like georgevtucker to be sure.

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It should be "One of the few Blood magic spells that does not require . . ."

A singular subject ("one") requires a singular verb ("does").