Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

[dogscoff]

Well I'm enjoying it. You take your time rolling out the story Atrocities, I'm enjoying the pace.

I'm not sure about anyone else but I think I could probably use a short "who's who" sheet on the characters to keep to one side as I read the story.

[Ruatha]

Origins (A bit of Darwinism here ?).

I was a bit confused at first due to the repost of three parts but the fourth part introduced yet another thrilling substory.
What more to come? And what happens at the camp at right this moment?

Keep writing.

(How old do these poeple become?)

[Atrocities]

It all fits together. One peace at a time.

Here is the current list as of Part X. I do have more detailed character descriptions, but I will post them after I have finished the chapter. I actually give away some new information here but not to much.

Characters:
General Thomas Allen Christopher – Lead Character - Hero of the battle of Camellia (Capital of the Praetorian Republic) now Director of the Space Exploration Division.

Melissa Ruby Harpenger - Former girl friend of Thomas Christopher, now married to Bob Benton.
Captain Richard Hess – General Thomas Christophers aid.

Joe Kelly – Pilot

Dr. Brook Mentor – Top scientist in Gravametric Technology.
Dr. Bill Ramzies – Scientist working under Dr. Mentor.
Nina Smith - Student & Assistant to Dr. Mentor
Mike Roberts - Student
Melissa Anne - Student

Admiral Robert ‘Bob’ Benton III -Prime Minister
Melissa Ruby Benton – Wife of Robert ‘Bob’ Benton III
Cheryl Clinton - Spy who watches Benton / reports to General Green.

John Lesser (Deceased Director of SED)

General Philip Albert Green - Military Advisor to the Prime Minister.
Sergeant Ruddy Arnold - General Green Staff
Lieutenant Jasper Elise - General Green Staff

Colonel Carl Wilhelm’s - Leader of the Pennington massacre & SEPC Dir.
Captain Victor Nezbit (Dead communications office from Pennington masscre)
Brigadier General Lamar Strider (Committed suicide after Pennington masscre)

General Ritta Alice Wilson - Commander Andovor Base
Captain Macmillan O’Connor – Officer in control of Camp Discovery
Lieutenant Michael Winston - Capt. O’Connor’s Aid
Major Jellico Mantel - Lead Pilot Guardian One
Captain Chad Jeffery’s - Co-Pilot of Guardian One
Sergeant Paul Harris - Hard nosed Tactical Trooper assigned to Guardian One
PFC Kord Anuran - Tactical Trooper assigned to Guardian One
Ron Lindley - Chief Engineer GEC
Calvin Kurd - Assistant Engineer GEC

King Chandler Gore the Fifth (Founder the Global Alliance – assinated by his son Devon Gore.)
Devon Gore (Dead Chairman of the Global Alliance – Killed by Thomas Christopher at the battle of Camellia.)

Senator Owen Cassady - One of the oldest Senators of the UGA & A member of the Salideen religious order.
Senator Caparo Kordesh - Alorian - Member of the Illuminati

Trax Jafi - Hybrid Alorian - Member of the Illuminati

General Lee Westmore Forman – Former Military Advisor to the Priminister

[ March 19, 2003, 17:16: Message edited by: Atrocities ]

[Atrocities]

I hate to give up this information, but it won't be used the story for a while so here it goes.

The average lifespan for a pure breed human is about 145 years. A pure bred Alorians life span is about 205 years of age. A half-breed can live to around 170 years of age.

[Atrocities]

Just posting to keep it on the top burner for a while. If you like it, please let me know. If you don't email Fyron about it. J/k

[Atrocities]

Pandoran Ship set

To view the race click => HERE

[ March 28, 2003, 04:55: Message edited by: Atrocities ]

[sachmo]

Oh, I like it. I like it a lot! Sorry for the interruption...please continue, my good man.

[TerranC]

Best. Shipset. Ever.

Atrocities, if I could give you another 5 stars, I would

[Atrocities]

You guys make it all worth the effort.

Thank you. I hope they look ok in game. The top down images are long and skinny. Not a good combination for SE IV.

[dogscoff]

Great stuff Atrocities, however I'd like to issue a warning to everyone else here:

DO NOT READ THE SHIPSET'S RACE HISTORY! Major spolier for the story

Oh, and atrocities, when you did a search/replace capitalise all instances of "pandora", you also capitalised every P in the file, for example sPace, PeoPle...