Re: The Trillian Empire
 

Awwww Hell! Is he in for it! http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon10.gif

Very Good Chapter as usual, i like your style of writing! I enjoyed reading this, as i bet everyone else will! Great Writing! http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

I know it's pretty soon but i decided to rate you 5 stars, this is an amazingly good story!

[ June 21, 2003, 11:14: Message edited by: Senator Raging Deadstar ]

Re: The Trillian Empire
 

Ok Clark, I'm going to have to hurt you if you keep addicting me to this story. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon8.gif http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/tongue.gif http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon10.gif

But great two chapters, my friend. I like your style of writing and you are developing your characters greatly. Keep it up!

Re: The Trillian Empire
 

Very, very good. I've payed good money for books not half this good. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon12.gif
Sure you hasn't done this before ?

My $ 0.02
With the quality you got here, its almost a pity to totally lock yourself into following a single game. It may be better to let the story progress a little more freely (but still within the SEIV universe).

Re: The Trillian Empire
 

Thank you all for the praise, it is encouraging to say the least. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon10.gif

I must say that I feel my story here has a long way to go to compare to many of the other stories I have seen here.

I've never done any writing in the sci-fi genere- I've done a few short stories, but nothing like this. Ragnarock, Erax, and (I'm sorry, I can't find the thread to remind me of the authors name) the Remeorhaz story are models for what I am doing.

So anything you see here is becuase of THEIR effort. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

I've been playing a few turns ahead, and I am still waiting to to get to the point where they go through the warp point. after that, I should be able to add some "thrills and spills" to the story line!

I am finding I play more conservativly this way, mainly becuase I have a ship full of people I am now invested in. How about you? http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon12.gif

I should have an update (through the warp point) on Monday sometime... saty tuned.

Re: The Trillian Empire
 

A good read...
A good story...
A good beginning...

Good Job

Re: The Trillian Empire
 

sachmo is the author of Remorhaz