April 9th, 2003, 02:16 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2002
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Re: Once Upon The Stars (Updated 07-04-04)
Atrocities,
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The story is not what you would call action packed is it? It will become so soon enough in its own way.
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There is much more to a good story than packing it full of action. You make your story very interesting. Even without being action packed. The roller coaster is thrilling. But, the bumper cars are bLast! 
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The best thing people can do is what all of you keep doing, telling those of us who post such stories that you enjoy our work. Thanks.
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You are more than 'Welcome'!
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