[Panpiper]

I am extremely interested in this project of yours. Expect to get some major feedback from me when you've posted your rewrite. Thank you ever so much for your efforts.

One thing I did not spot in your first draft was any mention of exactly how many design points one should have to spend in order to build a 'balanced' race. Obviously such a point recommendation is rather moot without the other sections (gems, pretenders, etc.) also being at least rudimentarily present, but it aught to give us a ball park.