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Default Re: Bretonnia, Knights of the Grail v.0.92 - Now with grammar!

Burnsaber:

I will do even better. I will try to list as many as I can find for you.

DISCLAIMER: Some of the corrections I suggest may not apply because of the minor differences in English in Europe.

Mounted Yeoman:
dishonourable ---> dishonorable
Labour --> Labor
manoeuvres ----> maneuvers
Armour ---> Armor

Knight Errant(2756):
Labour --> labor
vigour --> vigor
colourful --> colorful

Grammar: The are out to make a name for themselves, hoping to be granted a fief for their bravery. (The should be They)


Knight Errant (2757):
Honour --> Honor
Same grammar error as Knight Errant

Pegasus Knight:
Pegasii --> Pegasi

Brettonian Pegasus
Same as Pegasus Knight

Yeoman Outrider:
Maneuvers is spelled wrong again


Brettonian Lord:
anough --> enough

Marquis:
neighbour --> neighbor
Knight Errants ---> Knights Errant

Grail Hero:
Pegasii --> pegasi


Grail Maiden:
Magics ---> Magic


Grail Damsel:
Rumour --> Rumor
splendour --> splendor

Lady of the Lake:
Channelling --> Channeling

The Green Knight:
Bastonge --> Bastogne (Unless Bastonge is the proper name in WH?)


The Last Druid:
which allowed him to fend of the Ermorian invaders and build the Kingdom of Bretonnia. (of should be off)

Beastmaster (Should this be Beast Master?):
Pegasii --> Pegasi

Battle Gryphon:
agression --> aggression

Grail Crusade:
judgement --> judgment

Ride the Winds:
suprise --> surprise

Virtue of Nobility:
swordarm --> sword arm

Mist:
Bastonge --> Bastogne

Nation Description:
artefact --> artifact



Those are the ones I have found with a quick glance. I did not list the words that had extra Us like honour etc beyond the first instance because they may be intentional UK spellings.

Also I noticed the scout costs 0 gold. I changed it to 20. Was that intentional, maybe a CBM thing?

I hope that helps!
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