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		Here's my first piece of fan fiction. It's short I hope you like it. It's the first of a few of them I want to write. 
 
I'm dumb and I can't figure out how to submit it to SE.net, so I've posted it here. 
		
	
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		Different but in a good way. I'd read more definetly. 
 
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		Well I already responded to your post on SEnet, so no need to duplicate the efforts.   
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		Great punchline at the end.  Hmm, that reminds me... *heads off to SEV suggestions thread* 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		I wrote a "submissions guideline" sticky thread. What do you think? 
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		Nice story! A good "take" on what happens when First Contact occurs in SEIV... 
 
And now I know why douglas ran off to the SE:V Wishlist... lol. 
 
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		Very good, some of the best SE4 fanfic I've read in quite a while. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		And this fanfic is about a "neutral" race? 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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		 Yep. These guys are neutrals. That sticky post is great. Is MS Word an okay format? 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		Sure. I already added your story though.    Wasn't sure what exactly to put for the title (and optional subtitle).
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