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					Originally Posted by Swan  Are they correct? | 
	
 Not to dash your hopes about becoming a gaming limerick master, but no.  They don't follow the appropriate meter for limericks.  I appreciate that this is probably a lot more difficult for a non-native speaker, but you might have a look at some limerick resources.  For starters, see Wikipedia's entry on 
limericks.
++ for enthusiasm, though :-)