Othaglot and Cane - Story Thread

[dumbluck]

Ohhhh, the plot thickens....

[dogscoff]

Chapter 14 is up. Minor cosmetic tweaks have been made to some previous chapters, but nothing worth re-reading them for.

Click here for the new Chapter.

BTW, my old email address (the altavista one) will stop working soon, since altavista have decided to withdraw the service. My new address for all communication is dogscoff@eudoramail.com so please update your address books, those of you who ever email me.

[ October 26, 2002, 20:22: Message edited by: dogscoff ]

[Baron Munchausen]

The top of the page for chapter 14 says 'Chapter 13' -- recycling the previous page as a form for the next one has its minor hazards...

Very interesting. I figured that's who she'd turn out to be when she first appeared, though. Darn if I can make the faintest at guess what the 'big plot' behind all of this is, though.

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Thanks for the bugspotting. I'll sort that.

Very interesting. I figured that's who she'd turn out to be when she first appeared, though.

There's still room for a surprise yet=-) For example, we haven't seen who's in the cryo tube that Cane and Singh are about to open...

Seriously, I've been trying to heavily signpost the possibility of Sloo as the escapee, all the while implying that she's a vicious, unstable, manipulative and highly dangerous psychopath. I was kind of hoping to make Cane's innocent friendship with her as sinister as possible. Egomaniac that I am, I like to imagine that everyone's been biting their fingernails in anticipation of the Chapter where she finally turns. At the same time I've been trying to foster a sense of "this is too obvious, it can't be her...

[dumbluck]

Seriously, I've been trying to heavily signpost the possibility of Sloo as the escapee, all the while implying that she's a vicious, unstable, manipulative and highly dangerous psychopath. I was kind of hoping to make Cane's innocent friendship with her as sinister as possible. Egomaniac that I am, I like to imagine that everyone's been biting their fingernails in anticipation of the Chapter where she finally turns. At the same time I've been trying to foster a sense of "this is too obvious, it can't be her...

Well, that's pretty much exactly how you had me thinking, so you did a pretty good job.

Oh, yea, BUMP

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Haven't done much writing lately, and I'm not sure just how to structure the next few chapters.

Also, I've just had to send my brand spanky new Vaio notebook back to Sony for repair (dodgy modem- ) so although I do have another PC and one here at work I could use, I don't enjoy working on them so much.

Still, I'll try to get something posted soon.

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My god, is it really six weeks since the Last chapter? Sorry, ppl, things have been hectic.

Anyway, fifteen is up, sixteen is well on the way.

The next few chapters are going to be *really* exciting.