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		Very nice read.  I wanted to know, so I checked. 
Close Estimate:
 
Words = 48353 
Characters = 228211 
Sentances = 3724
 
Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9 
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4
 
Font 10 
Times New Roman  = 64 pages.
 
I would say that you are off and running on that book.     
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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Very nice read.  I wanted to know, so I checked. 
 
Close Estimate: 
 
Words = 48353 
Characters = 228211 
Sentances = 3724 
 
Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9 
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4 
 
Font 10 
Times New Roman  = 64 pages. 
 
I would say that you are off and running on that book.     
			
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		And a Wow for  sachmo      . 
Moderators: can we make a sticky of this tread. 
Because this will give everyone a lesson in how to roleplay in SEIV 
 
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		http://www.geocities.com/hohoho611ca/storylinks.html
You should post a link to this thread in the "Classic Threads" thread.  
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		Although I enjoy this story, I feel that you should take some time and proof read your work. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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Although I enjoy this story, I feel that you should take some time and proof read your work.
			
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 You are right, but I like to take the limited time that I have to play the game and write the story. Since this is just for fun, I was hoping that most people would overlook the gramatical and spelling errors. BTW, you did much better this time...I'm proud of you.    
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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