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		Although I enjoy this story, I feel that you should take some time and proof read your work. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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 You are right, but I like to take the limited time that I have to play the game and write the story. Since this is just for fun, I was hoping that most people would overlook the gramatical and spelling errors. BTW, you did much better this time...I'm proud of you.    
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		*Shakes his head*  MoW, why do you have to be so mean?  For the love of god, this is one of the best stories out, and you have to go and insult the writer?  We all, every Last one of us, have limited time to do many things in life.  The fact that a few of us take time out of our busy days and do something as talented as what Sachmo has done here, should be viewed as an inspiration and not be aynilized word by word. 
My spelling sucks, and I know that a great many of the poeple here would love for me to buy a Word Processor, but the plain truth is simple. I post here because I enjoy it, not because its a job.  If you want perfection in life, and from what I gather you do, then perhaps you should go somewhere else.  For here, we don't stand on it, and we appreciate what people do to make this site, and this game even more enjoyable than it already is.  
 
You can either be a part of it, or not, but please do not aspire to insult someone as talented as Sachmo.  His work is beyond approach.
 
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		Please forgive me.  Sachmo, your writing skills are awsome to say the least.  I am humbled by your skill, and honestly did not mean any offense.  I mean that.  I love what you have posted, and wish for you to go on posting.  Mr. Atrocities is right about one thing, I should learn to keep my big mouth shut. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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		Well, I have read through all Sachmo's Posts and can't find one single mispelling of the word 'canon' anywhere.     
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		You didn't offend me, MoW. That was my point. There are a lot of people you need to apologize to on this forum, but I'm not one of them. If you step up and apologize, then we can probably be friends. If not, I'll just ignore you. I won't fight, either, so don't bother. Thanks for listening. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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		Ok, any future Posts in this thread not directly related to the story will be deleted without warning. I am not going to lock this one down. I like it too much.     
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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