Rise of the Remorhaz Society

Gryphin · #1 November 25th, 2002, 02:19 AM

Sachmo,
I like both equaly.

Erax · #2 November 24th, 2002, 10:11 PM

Sachmo, this is my first post on this thread. Your work deserves a six star rating (on a scale from one to five).

I think the turn report is the 'meat and potatoes' of your story, I for one want to know how things are moving along for the Remorhaz people. That being said, a few background Posts now and then liven up the story. So I guess I like both kinds, but I'd like the reports to be more than half of the story.

capnq · #3 November 24th, 2002, 11:12 PM

I like to see a mix. Game reports are good for the main action, but background and subplots make for more variety and individuality. The hardest part of writing game reports is keeping them from all sounding the same.

I haven't done as much with subplots so far in History of the Galaxy II as I'd like to.

[Edit] Oops, forgot to stroke Sachmo's ego.

You're doing a great job here.

[ November 24, 2002, 21:15: Message edited by: capnq ]

Wardad · #4 December 3rd, 2002, 06:30 PM

Woof!

Woof!!!

dumbluck · #5 December 7th, 2002, 10:47 AM

I think he's having too much fun interacting with gasp humans in the HotG game to play the lowly AI in RotRS.

sachmo · #6 December 8th, 2002, 02:55 AM

Actually, they both have their upsides. I hope to have another chapter up before the weekend is over. I really don't intend to abondon this story, however I make no promises that it will end before I die of old age!

dumbluck · #7 December 8th, 2002, 11:16 AM