The Trillian Empire

[clark]

I did a slight edit to chapter 2 to adjust the pacing- it seemed to move a little too fast. Anybody care to comment?

I must say I am excited about the start, as I have a nice situation with which to shape the first part of this story. I think everyone will be in for a treat (at least for the next two chapters).

I must also confess I screwed up- I forgot to adjust the culture traits- and I'm playing with a max 5000 bonus. And I get nothing! Argh. But, I look at it as a way to make things a bit more exciting, make the odds a bit higher... but the research and production is killin me!