Brief story...

Aiken · #1 May 28th, 2004, 07:14 AM

Who, who was it? Tell us the names!

Atrocities · #2 May 28th, 2004, 09:06 AM

Writing is so much fun. To bad I cannot focus long enough to do it any more.

Great read.

sachmo · #3 May 28th, 2004, 05:27 PM

Neat!

dogscoff · #4 May 28th, 2004, 06:49 PM

Good stuff. More! You should wrrite something from the point of view of the other side...

Slynky · #5 May 29th, 2004, 02:19 AM

I think it's well written. It was quite interesting. (glad to see it wasn't from my current game with you

, though I suppose the way things are going i COULD be the target of such a piece)

Joachim · #6 May 30th, 2004, 01:12 AM

Thanks for the kind comments

I have since done the turn and the very actions described...... As for the other side I'll leave that to the 'victims'

Raging Deadstar · #7 May 30th, 2004, 12:15 PM

Only just got round to reading this and it's a great short story. We've all had to incinerate a homeworld at one point

Would you be willing for me to put this up On Spaceempires.net in the fanfiction section?