Othaglot and Cane - Story Thread

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Seriously, I've been trying to heavily signpost the possibility of Sloo as the escapee, all the while implying that she's a vicious, unstable, manipulative and highly dangerous psychopath. I was kind of hoping to make Cane's innocent friendship with her as sinister as possible. Egomaniac that I am, I like to imagine that everyone's been biting their fingernails in anticipation of the Chapter where she finally turns. At the same time I've been trying to foster a sense of "this is too obvious, it can't be her...

Well, that's pretty much exactly how you had me thinking, so you did a pretty good job.

Oh, yea, BUMP

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Haven't done much writing lately, and I'm not sure just how to structure the next few chapters.

Also, I've just had to send my brand spanky new Vaio notebook back to Sony for repair (dodgy modem- ) so although I do have another PC and one here at work I could use, I don't enjoy working on them so much.

Still, I'll try to get something posted soon.

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My god, is it really six weeks since the Last chapter? Sorry, ppl, things have been hectic.

Anyway, fifteen is up, sixteen is well on the way.

The next few chapters are going to be *really* exciting.

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So.... having read the latest chapter, who is still 100% sure that Sloo is the killer?

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Here's another chapter for y'all. More is right around the corner...

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Yep, still 99.375% sure that Sloo is not a nice person.

Now, as to whether or not she is the one from the container....

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Chapter 17 is now available- a bit of light relief and plot development, makes a nice change from all this emotional stuff.

Chapter 18 is ready for posting, but I want chapters 19 and 20 ready before I do that.

Oooooh, I tell ya, it all starts to get messy very soon...

Also, I'm working on another courier story