Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!

[Ragnarok]

Originally posted by capnq:
I especially like the parts that describe Hedorvah society from their own viewpoint. Describing an alien culture without sounding like a college lecture can be tricky.

Yeah tell me about it. It is very hard to do so. When the story first started out there were alot of conversations that would make up the chapter. But as each chapter comes along I find myself being able to describe more from a third person point of view basically. Which adds alot more to the story.
I agree though, I enjoy being able to describe their culture from their own POV unstead of an aliens POV.