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Old November 21st, 2004, 09:41 AM
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Default Re: Conceptual Balance Series (Mod)

While speaking of typos:

- In Pretenders/Spells mod descriptions, independently is spelt "independantly", and its is spelt "it's" in "its own particular niche use".
- In the description for the Son of the Sun, its is spelt "it's" in "The sun has gifted its heir". The same goes for the Oracle: "in its Dominion [...] Within its sacred waters"
- I do not know whether this bothers you or not, as Illwinter's descriptions do the same, but season is used to describe a turn, while a season Lasts three turns (Early Summer, Summer, and Late Summer for example).

I like the changes you have made to Pretenders, but do not have any actual comment (I have not delved much into the Spell mod yet).
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